Tuesday, August 23, 2011

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One sided off centre
we sit as family
In two tone past
Being then being memory
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michael oliver
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David Beckham 25 August 2011

You have excellently captured time and delivered a poem that captures you from the beggining to the end, narrating in pure poetic style, a family event and thus reminding us perhaps to take another look at those old family pictures and remember the stories they hold. Really enjoyed.10/10

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