Thursday, July 31, 2008

Cheesy Moon (Ghazal) Comments

Rating: 3.0

Look up and gaze at craters on the cheesy moon.
A cow, a spoon jumping over the cheesy moon.

Opening the refrigerator, what cheese now?
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Ben Gieske
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Written with such flair and finesse Ben and I can see why it deserved to be published! I am not a lover of the Ghazal format, but after reading this I can see that the repetitions do not have to be boring. love Karin

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Kesav Easwaran 05 August 2008

a very choosy moon yours this cheesy moon, Ben...a cheesy poem this 10/10

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