Great poem if you fix two small errors:
Unless you eat 100,00
should be
Unless you eat 100,000
and
Most women make you ticker
Stop working
should be
Most women make your ticker
Stop working
Thank you so much Kim! ! I made the changes..Thats how I wrote it..I just got in a hurry..I have three years of poems Im going through and I'm trying to put them all on here in one day..LOL..Much Appreciated
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Great poem if you fix two small errors: Unless you eat 100,00 should be Unless you eat 100,000 and Most women make you ticker Stop working should be Most women make your ticker Stop working
Thank you so much Kim! ! I made the changes..Thats how I wrote it..I just got in a hurry..I have three years of poems Im going through and I'm trying to put them all on here in one day..LOL..Much Appreciated