Monday, December 28, 2015

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A friend of mine said today
That while in jail
All he needed was to
Be with his girlfriend
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Kim Barney 28 December 2015

Great poem if you fix two small errors: Unless you eat 100,00 should be Unless you eat 100,000 and Most women make you ticker Stop working should be Most women make your ticker Stop working

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Weldon Davis 31 December 2015

Thank you so much Kim! ! I made the changes..Thats how I wrote it..I just got in a hurry..I have three years of poems Im going through and I'm trying to put them all on here in one day..LOL..Much Appreciated

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Weldon Davis

Weldon Davis

Fayetteville NC USA
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