I saw you in my backyard
My eyes were fixed on your warm sunny breast
Early as you tugged strings from from the moist tanned ground
I saw you in my back yard
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The stunning images, recurring and brilliant lines and wonderful poetic expressions make this poem magnificent. Beautifully crafted.
Rose Marie, your comments are always so encouraging and beautifully expressed! I'm most appreciative.
I enjoyed the poem's lovely imagery. My favorite lines were: 'I saw you in my back yard Late signing as you retreated to the trees year-round Did I hear a lilting whistle near the honeysuckle' Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful gem..
Evelyn, I'm honored by your visiting my poems and your thoughtfulness in considering them.