Sunday, December 28, 2008

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CHEERFUL THOUGHTS
Cheerful thoughts like sunbeams,
Lighten up the darkest fears,
For when heart is happy,
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dr. ram sharma
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Jeffrey Lee 28 December 2008

cute, but the last word seems a little weak. suggestion for last line something like 'you just can't feel down'

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Bob Blackwell 28 December 2008

A very happy poem, I like it.

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