Wednesday, October 16, 2019

Cheerful Rain Gentle Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cheerful rain gentle wind
no lightning or frightening thunder
Rain sounds like a nursery rhyme
with evening yellow rays of sun!
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 October 2019

A beautifully envisioned children song on enjoyable and pleasant rain accompanied by yellow sun rays. Thanks for sharing the beautiful aspect of rain.10 points.

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Sankaran Ayya 16 October 2019

Beautiful nice comment. Thank you Ratnakar Mandik.

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Kingsley Egbukole 16 October 2019

Beautiful poem on rain and children. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH. Kingsley Egbukole

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Sankaran Ayya 16 October 2019

Thank you KINGSLEY. I have read and commented on your poems. Pl. check

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