Thursday, November 8, 2012

Cheer Up Comments

Rating: 4.5

Walking under the bright sun
Holding an umbrella
And little sweat come out from body
Well, I think it's cheer me up.
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Ency Bearis 12 November 2012

A great metaphor well penned

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C. P. Sharma 08 November 2012

It's great, who can be free from flaws but every dark cloud has a silver lining too that can make us sparkle. You say it in so sweet and musical words.

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