Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Cheek To Cheek Comments

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I want to dance with you cheek to cheek
I don't want to smoke this ganja's stick

I want to hold you tight in my arms
I want to feel alright have the charms
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Asif Andalib
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Poetheart Morgan 12 September 2012

Hit the target. So simple andsimple e concise. And i love dance cheek o cheek. Beautiful! ! !

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Valsa George 11 September 2012

A small little poem, expressing warm emotions and rhyming well ! !

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Simon Odhiambo 11 September 2012

A well written poem, straight forward and flows with the rythm. Well done!

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Sanjay Mehta 11 September 2012

Nice write, at times it is musical. It is an tragedy with us humans as dawn dawns on us only when we cross the goalpost. Thanks for sharing.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 11 September 2012

Well, this poem is a mixture of lots of different charming things. like love, feeling of being happy, and some how (if I got it right) some worry about loosing a love. you spread these feelings with some nice fragrant words in the best way that you can. this poem is a great art. well done

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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