Friday, July 17, 2009

~ Checkmate ~ Comments

Rating: 4.2

I sweat
To be a poet
Please wait
I’ll be a poet.
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MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 September 2020

we want you to be the rebel poet waiting for your poems

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A B Faniki 08 September 2019

Nicely done.

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 July 2018

'I sweat to be a poet', indeed, interesting reading.

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Kim Barney 19 December 2014

You are already a poet. This is well done, but I thought it would be about chess. I love a good game of chess. Three of my poems are about chess. They are IGOR, ETERNAL GAME? and BULLDOG OF IDAHO CHESS.

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Buddy Bee Anthony 12 December 2012

The more I get of you, and I may not be qualified to judge these matters, but, the more I feel your verbiage is of the highest poetic standard. Buddy Bee Anthony

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Sisirachandra Vaduge 29 November 2012

u re a poet ' vat more, y cant you? ...sisirachandra vaduge please read & coment for my recent experience for rural plantation education thanks rain rain go away best wises with seasons greetings towards x'mas 2012

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Hudhaifah Siyad 26 November 2012

hey be bold miss....its reall irony

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2012

i did not get ur poem which invited me to read

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2012

i did not get what have to be but in this journey ideas will flash and words will move as wave when it wll find as particle it can be hold by hands just a minutes this world will taunt u nice poem with this checkmate i am also running the things which i wished but not acquired

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Anita Sehgal 04 June 2012

Interesting way of expressing!

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Ramesh T A 16 April 2012

By writing this poem you have already become a poet! Don't lose heart! Keep it up!

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Ayan Dasgupta 08 July 2011

Voted a tenner Niv - you shouldn't go like this... Ayan

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Ayan Dasgupta 08 July 2011

It's indeed a miracle, you don't comprehend But you're a fine shepherdess of words, We basked in your fervent shades, my friend Yet you say, you'll fly off with the birds!

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Murphy Payne 21 March 2011

Greetings Ms. Nivedita, I read this poem, twice. I also read some of the comments left about this poem. I don't get it. I think this poem is full of nothing.. I like more meat in my poems.

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Subbaraman N V 18 January 2011

We enjoy your poems. You are indeed a nice poet whom I respect.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 11 December 2010

Really it so. Nobody can become a poet unless his or her nature is poetic. It is not necessary that a poet should be educated, or a degree holder, but the heart must be full of fancies and emotions along with flow of language.you've presented it in a quite nice way of expression. Thanks for sharing such a good poem.

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Manolo Del Toro 30 November 2010

I like it a lot, it is a ten.

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Narender Singh Bansal 28 November 2010

Life seems to be game to be played fresh every day, death has to come inevitably but before that we have to win it

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Shalini Samuel 18 October 2010

though you are already a poet the humble and modest heart of yours refuses to accept it. :) Thats a great thing. With this thought in mind, you will keep on trying to improving your poetic talents and glow forever... Loved your attitude as well as your poem mam.

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 October 2010

The poet, an endless flow, process, no time to wait, no time to waste, good to freeze and think about it for a moment like I sense you did here, then just move on. sweat To be a poet Please wait I’ll be a poet. Sometimes we have already achived something without even knowing that. You are a poet.

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