Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Checklist, Done And Done Comments

Rating: 5.0

No time to dabble, in the lazy, today,
Polevaulting what obstacles, lead me astray
Much to accomplish, the chalkboard declares
For one, on a mission, one who prepares...
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 01 February 2014

It IS a marathon isn't it! Staying focused and true to one's ultimate goal... just finishing isn't enough. I enjoyed this pen immensely... Thank you!

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Valsa George 15 November 2013

Life is often a Marathon race with boulders lying on the way and greater hurdles blocking the onward movement! Some we have to jump over. Some need to be polevaulted! But stay focussed and run the race! Beautiful! !

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Gajanan Mishra 05 November 2013

endless rewrites, good one, thanks. Please read my new poems and comment.

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Susan Lacovara

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