Tuesday, December 4, 2018

Check Your Stomach For What It Can Hold! Comments

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War or peace
Great price to be paid for both
Check your stomach
For what it can hold.
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Savita Tyagi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 September 2022

An insightful piece... appreciated! !

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2020

I was expecting somethin' about food, hoping for ice cream. " It's" should (of course) be " Its" . An easy mistake to make. It's so easy, I think I've done the same. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

This is a brilliant poem on peace and war relating to life having nice execution and touching expression.. Thank you dear madam for sharing this valuable poem.10

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