Saturday, November 21, 2015

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Rating: 5.0

Don't feign surprise to find the cafe has closed
Once this was your favorite place, so fresh so new
Brightly painted, loud vibrant sidewalks calling
What stimulating sensations lay in store for you
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Edmund Strolis
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Dimitrios Galanis 12 January 2016

An obituary [necrology] to memories deserved, in real poetic vibrating throb.

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Pamela Sinicrope 21 November 2015

The ghosts of diners past! I can relate to this poem.... Loyal patron forever searching for another fresh cafe. Well written with lots of imagery and movement, and memory. Thanks for sharing Edmund! :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

Silent expectation of dreamy shutter is very wonderfully opened up here with wise and interesting motive. Very nice sharing done really.10

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Kelly Kurt 21 November 2015

If old buildings could talk. Nicely written, Edmund

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