Cheating Death. Comments

I commented in July also. bri : )

The poem seems more like an essay or editorial, but it does give some boost to some people's anxiety. Booooo! And my Booooo is NOT for Halloween.

I think last six lines are the key. My mate already feels a 'small' group of humans is plotting and carrying out actions to decrease world popuation and have Earth as their 'own playground'. bri ;)

Re: 'If at all it becomes successful present suffering in the world would increase many folds.' I tend to think you are correct in your prediction. But...something doesn't sound right.

'do evade death for some period, ' 'to evade'? I'll take death to/'instead of' immortality any day! ! !

This is a magnificent piece.....thanks for sharing...

A very thought-provoking poem, Poet Dash. Personally, I believe in immortality, even after the physical body has died. The people that you've mentioned (you forgot Walt Disney) are in for a great shock!

Those who are born they are bound by the death no matter what they do, when life started it will definitely end with death. Like sunrise and sunset. We humans are greedy by nature we always want more and more. Wonderful thought provoking poem.5****

A great insightful poem. I concur with your analysis as enunciated in the ultimate stanza.

Another brilliant write so well presented and expressed.

Very informative. I have gained so much knowledge in all your poems.

You acquired a wide range of knowledge and experience, Sir. Thank you for sharing them to us weaving them into beautiful poems.