Sunday, March 11, 2012

' Cheating ' Comments

Rating: 2.7

I Whispered sweet nothing's in his ears
set him off, on a shindig anear
Jovial, and again young at heart
he weaved a 'web of lies' so smart
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Yamini Khanna
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Jessie Jett 13 March 2012

Can I quote, and quote many phrases from this poem- very true writing. love marks hidden away from my sight Chameleon like changing his skin............ Slow poisoning, intense toxicity wringing heart, what an atrocity accept him back, and love resurrect? serious doubts, about my ' Love's Intellect ' A funeral of love in light. So sacraed vows. Very enduring. I liked it.

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