Thursday, October 16, 2008

Cheater Comments

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Look at the way she falls on the floor
Weeping, crying, begging to stay.
He look down at her with cool calculation,
thinking she was nothing but a frustration.
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Carissa McBride
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brittany 08 December 2008

dang...... you got it. very nice job.

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Jay Boyd 21 October 2008

nice poem keep it up... its beautiful, i love it.

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Carissa McBride

Carissa McBride

Toledo Ohio
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