Cheater Comments

I loved this Poem and felt it to the very depth of my soul! You did a good job relating to all the emotions not only you felt but others could and would feel in this situation! I must say this was an eye opener for me that to feel connected to you and not even knowing you personally! Thanks for sharing this I totally enjoyed it! Good Luck in writings and I hope you continue to do so! !

Loved your flow of words... Hell with cheater.. Love is only for two too much for three10sssss all the way

I am sorry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is written with so much emotions.. I was moved.. These kind of things happens always. Just the thought of marriage gives me creeps, some times the thought of fall in love with some one gives me creeps, cause this kinda thing happen it hurts! ! ! ! this is very good ma'am.. i was very moved.. with loves Shan

Although written in strictly rhyming couplets, this poem rings true all along. The despair and disappointment of the subject (whether yourself or another) are clearly expressed and evoke real sympathy.

Well, presumably not quite 'forgotten in memory's grave' if you're writing about it, though there's little doubt you want to forget. There are good lines here, and I like your no-nonsense, direct approach which I see sorely lacking in many contemporary poems. How about writing a poem about the cheater's perspective on things?

wow, i loved the poem as well as the rhythm and i loved the story too amazing poem 10

Memories of my parents divorce...... Sad but Beautiful

Extremely sad, this is one of my biggest fears. i have too many :) so im still trying to work on trusting my boyfriend of 6 months. Well done

Another great one 10++ kept writing

Hey DC There is pain in your words.and the readers feel it...

Adulterers and adultery very painful and no one really wins....a ten

hmmm, i hate cheaters i really hate them.... 10s

'You went away to kill us and answer cheatings call' Very strong and thought out words I love it, cheating does call on ppl, but its up to the person whether or not to answer. The poem is nice, real nice. Don't u just hate cheaters=) DIMPLzZ

I hate cheater personal I dont cheat 10s.......

well that s a tragic piece indeed..... well i hope i can burry somethings as easily as that...nice effective piece that can touch the heart ma'am..liked it very much..nice one.. 10++ with lots of love shan