Saturday, January 14, 2006

Cheated On Comments

Rating: 5.0

She entered the bar with a grace i've never seen
She wore red lipstick, and blonde hair and quiet serene
Went up to the jukebox and played such a sad song
With tears in her eyes, you knew she'd been done wrong
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Donna Nimmo
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Nora Griffin 14 January 2006

I'm new to this website and posting poetry online, but I really enjoyed yours. I really like how you described the character and I hope to read more from you!

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