Cheated Lives Comments

This is a very sad and emotional poem. yet somehow pure.

ooo my GOSH! ! ! ! frigin' awesom Poison! ! ! ! love how your write your poems....more of a short story......soooo emotional and awesome! ! ! like you can actually visualize what your writting.....sooo very vivid.....thanks my friend! ! ! and as you would say 'keep inking the pages'! ! ! ! Brian

WOW Great style you have! Intriguing, emotional, so sound right, loved it, still trying to put the pieced together. NICE!