Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Cheated Comments

Rating: 3.8

A girl walks down the road,
A flower in her hand.
It's for who she loves,
The boy in the band.
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Grace Gordon
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purple moon 07 November 2008

A common story, many have been there too. And many will be many a time! if that makes any sense at all..... well done, nicely written in a simple but affective form, the hurt and dissapointment really comes through. x.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 September 2008

I can understand how much pain it is to be cheated....a tender heart in true pain..very well written..9

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Amber ... 19 September 2008

good poem Grace. why did you put down 1954?

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Emily Oldham 14 September 2008

This poem is nice :) ... Thanks Athena

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