Tuesday, June 17, 2008

Cheat Of Devotion Comments

Rating: 4.2

Unfathomable resentment
Treachery found, in lover's myth
Infidelity, grand blasphemy
Consented not, by whom you’re with
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Bob Gibson 07 April 2009

again and again! i feel the unbridled passion that went into this poem! i love your work Wendy! truly!

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Bob Gibson 03 April 2009

Brilliantly written Wendy! such unbridled passion has gone into this poem i could feel the knives of injustice just reading it, fantastic, a ten! regards Bob

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Kesav Easwaran 09 August 2008

strong poetic words beautifully framed in well organized lines...good write, Wendy...10 grade

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James B. Earley 21 July 2008

Excellent composition. Please read 'Stolen Moments.'

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Bob Gibson 17 June 2008

A very powerful poem, such strong emotions! beatifully portrayed

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