Cheat Comments

Very good poem on cheaters from one so young, a story so many have to handle, will read more as time allows--- why don't you write a poem about what you think love is you hav ethe talent, Regards Ken e

Very, very good. Keep reading Tyease, and keep getting better. I would suggest that you don't put your good stuff on the internet, and that you keep it for publishing. You want to work from the top-down (trying to get published in the best publications, and working your way down) , rather than the ground up. That's my advice. Keep up the good work, and great usage of metaphors. You've one of the only good poems that's been put on here by regular folk. Take care!

This a strongly worded and heart felt poem, great job

Brilliant poem.....I like your brave style in writing this poem, and I like the title too because it is too attractive......great job! ! Merna

Sinking words truthfully is the ultimate moral of this vey honest narrative and when we can live by that we can cope with hurt far more....... I liked this verse..... and give it 10 from Fay.

I remember my ex cheated on me with from Florida, but now I am happy that I'm free. Good writing Tyease.

Ahhh! ! ! sweet sixteen how well I recall such wonderful times and feelings. The joy as well as pain. A God given time. For youth is given to learn, to grow and find our selves. Learn Tyease learn well and prosper. Then when wisdom is yours....write your best work...........

Glad I'm a one woman man........Robert

nice, poem strong emotion displayed, here. thats good you lettin them out

Hello....I think, the epic part in the middle explains the story, and 'sink the words into the skin...'is beautifull....

this is so sad but this is something you have to face the truth...if someone cheated on you, you don't have to cry and feel sorry for yourself just try to remember how they broke your heart and hurt you in order never going back to them.... extremely well done pretty girl, i love every word of it....10 Hataw

well done, i can tell from this poem that your heart is just, a poem with such sincerity could not have come from a common floozie, anyway, give my work a peep if time suits you as ever ~L.H.~

wounderful work i love it 10 out of 10

strong feelings and emotions expressed in this poem.. nicely written. ana