My feet are pointing high in the air,
I'm blinded by a veil of hair.
My body is shaking, a teardropp appears...
Is it too late to let me out of here!
...
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Those cheap thrills will always leave you at the bottom of the hill.
Rollercoasters are on of the top five things in life. Nice Write
Great thrill. So beautiful is your style! I'm sure, I'll come here again.
Loved this surprising poem! and I love rollercoasters as well! Great poem here....and such a great thrill! as we approach the next steep hill! :)
How brilliant, I am now leaving here with a smile, thank you so much.
Just great Ruby - never been on a roller coaster, not my thing, but I can imagine the thrill.
Being a dirty old man I assumed a different scenario. You got me, but I enjoyed it, anyhow. I really wanted it to be like my original assumption.A real fun write
Excellent Ruby... I think everything you do is a thrill. what a fabulous personality you have.
Hahaha.....nothing unhappy about rollercoasters.....except maybe faulty harnesses: -)
Okay, you had me fooled. Unhappy ending but couldn't help but laugh.
I was thinking the wrong theme here, so funny, enjoyable with a twist at the end! !
Right you are, on the roller coaster or something equally enjoyable