Sunday, December 2, 2012

Cheap Thrill Comments

Rating: 5.0

My feet are pointing high in the air,
I'm blinded by a veil of hair.
My body is shaking, a teardropp appears...
Is it too late to let me out of here!
...
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Ruby Honeytip
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Right you are, on the roller coaster or something equally enjoyable

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Howard Savage 10 January 2016

Those cheap thrills will always leave you at the bottom of the hill.

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Owain Glyn 15 December 2012

You're braver than I am, really well constructed!

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Kevin Patrick 12 December 2012

Rollercoasters are on of the top five things in life. Nice Write

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Neela Nath Das 09 December 2012

Great thrill. So beautiful is your style! I'm sure, I'll come here again.

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Dee Corpolongo 09 December 2012

Loved this surprising poem! and I love rollercoasters as well! Great poem here....and such a great thrill! as we approach the next steep hill! :)

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Heather Wilson 08 December 2012

How brilliant, I am now leaving here with a smile, thank you so much.

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Valerie Dohren 04 December 2012

Just great Ruby - never been on a roller coaster, not my thing, but I can imagine the thrill.

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Joseph Anderson 04 December 2012

Being a dirty old man I assumed a different scenario. You got me, but I enjoyed it, anyhow. I really wanted it to be like my original assumption.A real fun write

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Lyn Paul 03 December 2012

Excellent Ruby... I think everything you do is a thrill. what a fabulous personality you have.

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Maggie Munro 03 December 2012

Thanks Ruby, enjoyed the ride you took me for 8]

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Ruby Honeytip 02 December 2012

Hahaha.....nothing unhappy about rollercoasters.....except maybe faulty harnesses: -)

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Red O'mara 02 December 2012

Okay, you had me fooled. Unhappy ending but couldn't help but laugh.

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Stevie Taite 02 December 2012

So much fun! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hahahahaha weeeeeeeeeee

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Hazel Durham 02 December 2012

I was thinking the wrong theme here, so funny, enjoyable with a twist at the end! !

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Rachel Branscombe 02 December 2012

For some reason this made me laugh. I don't know why

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