Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Chasm Of Silence Comments

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And yet this unexplainable distance
the roar of this deafening silence
sudden chasm that widens and separates
the gnawing in my heart unexpressed
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Seema Jayaraman
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Rajnish Manga 03 November 2015

At a time when we need to build bridges between warring factions of society, there is a deafening silence of those in power. Amazing thoughts put into words. Thanks. A quote: how wish a ropeway heart to heart bridge ...and yet the chasm of silence widens on.

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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015

thank you Rajnishji, this is an ole one I just uploaded it now.

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Sanjukta Nag 03 November 2015

as this Everest of yearning silently grows and yet the chasm of silence widens on. This is an amazingly written couplet. the pain of a lover's heart is revealed craftily.

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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015

thanks Sanjukta, this is an ole one I just fished from a Ole book.

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2015

Silence will lead you to love since love is immortal.....Lovely poem, I enjoyed it.

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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015

Thank you Asim, love is immortal at least we console ourselves saying so..

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