Friday, June 12, 2015

Chasing The Goose Comments

Rating: 4.5

Don't really know if it's all dreams
Or just a mere hallucinations
Or may just be a fictionated chapters
Or could even be collections of lies
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Shemsi Elsani
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Kwai Chee Low 14 June 2015

Great piece. I like the flow and tempo; your repetition of 4 line and 5 line stanza is mesmerising! Now I'm getting curious on what you are chasing!

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Shemsi Elsani 14 June 2015

Thank you very much for reading.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 June 2015

Wow a questioning intriguing poem that I enjoyed reading. The uncertainty expressed so poetically. Extraordinary muse unique to read. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Shemsi Elsani 14 June 2015

Thanks a lot for reading

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