Thursday, June 13, 2013

Chasing Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.7

In woods deep and dreamy blue
Boughs embracing, high and low
Disc of moon serene and soft
Like a gem from heaven’s loft
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Yasmin Khan
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 June 2013

This is a lovely poem about desire mingled dream and the desire is holy

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 16 June 2013

It is good never give up our dream, because there is a lesson in each. Some comes through, but then we see it was not really that special, some takes longer or some never comes in, because our subconscious knows what is the next lesson for us. However, when we arrive to the point that wait upon the Lord, what ever comes, be grateful for it and stop wanting and wishing, but enjoy the moment, every moment, that is when we find true happiness. Until then keep on wishing and dreaming. This is life.

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Somanathan Iyer 16 June 2013

very delightful poem. Nice thoughts.

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Sallam Yassin 13 June 2013

That Rose of your dream u picked and then a dream for an other! beautiful paint beneath the moonlit

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David Wood 13 June 2013

An enchanting poem that is so delightful to read.

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Farah Ilyas 13 June 2013

Driven a theme from just a mere piece is one of great summit of a brilliant artist, u r one of them...here how beautifully u described the situation, someone could easily visualize the painting in his/her imagination...outstanding

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Payal Parande 13 June 2013

beautiful...i am in awe..bravo ma'am

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Babatunde Aremu 13 June 2013

Great write. I like the use of imageries in tje poem

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