Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Chasing Cars........................ Comments

Rating: 4.6

Where do you go
If no one will hold your hand
Where do you go
If no one will understand
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Lyn Paul
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Mark Dillon 21 September 2013

Soul searchin, and sometimes it's a long dark road, and we need to look deep to find that light, we just need to believe in ourselves and something more. Great writting lyn.

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David Wood 21 September 2013

You sit down and write a poem, thats where you go! !

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Heather Wilkins 15 September 2013

many questions asked very few answers. always searching for the right answer. a good write

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Danny Draper 15 September 2013

It is so important to have a confident and a friend in which to trust a safe harbour a trusting mate. Emotional isolation is devastation.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 September 2013

We have nowhere to go................ but onwards.

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Hazel Durham 11 September 2013

We are always looking for answers to questions that hang in the air taunting us to find the truth that will set us free! Home we can find the answers as it hold's our heart! Beautiful write!

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Valsa George 10 September 2013

There are a number of questions coming one after the other to our mind. Though, answers are blurred, if we take time and ponder with concentration, our mind will clear up and the answers and solutions will hit us quite surprisingly! Enjoyed!

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2013

Beautiful poem Lyn. These questions are like chasing cars..The answer we know, but other may have quiet opposite answers of we have thought. Which dimension we are not sure...its like a puzzle.. Loved the way you presented.

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Unwritten Soul 10 September 2013

The title reminds me the song..chasing cars..i like the walking lines here, i can go and understand each with smiles...liked it! _Soul

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 September 2013

This is brilliant poetry, Lyn, with mindboggling questions!

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Gajanan Mishra 10 September 2013

never ending road, I like it, thanks.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2013

So where do you go Just what do you do When you hit home the answers will be waiting for you A good projection.

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