Chasing A Rainbow Comments

But she was unaware/And the rainbow smiled/Kissed her and whispered......endearing expression! A beautiful poem sir....10++

What a wonderful write with compelling imagery. Yes, we keep on searching for our rainbow without knowing that we already have within us.10

Amazing! ! ! beautiful poem 10 on 10......

I loved the descriptions. you write the most beautiful poem

I think Valsa is right, I also think this beautiful picture inspired the poet to write such a beautiful poem...........10

Wonderful imagery with a mystic thought. The narrative progresses as if a fairy tale is in the making: She was chasing a rainbow / And the rainbow of her soul / Was chasing her throughout / And the rainbow smiled / Kissed her.... / She saw in the mirror / A beautiful rainbow! Thanks for sharing the poem, Sir.

Very whimsical write! I think this beautiful picture has inspired you to write this lovely poem! Enjoyed!