Thursday, January 14, 2016

Chasing Comments

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In what lies at the bottom,
The center of this circle,
It's spinning in rotation,
But I can't make it through this hurdle,
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Joshua Hillard
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Thomas Plotz 15 January 2016

I've stumbled to something new, As these tears fill my eyes, The presence of what was there, Seems to remain in disguise. Great sense of emotional effects in this poem, Joshua. Keep warm up north on this January day. Thank you Sir. T.

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