Chased To My Death Comments

i want 2 put a stop 2 culling herds of wild horses that have lived there for thousands of yrs. they say they r a pest but thats only cuz we r building were they have lived for thousands of yrs.

Today i learnt a new word, brumby! I like the narration of the chase, the brilliant impersonation, the message of the ills of lack of peaceful co- existence, i like the whole thing... Good good work

im sur im 14... i just wright from the heart because im wrighting about things that happen to me or my feelings sime call it a talent, i just call it wrighting!

great structure and flow...fantastic imagery and meaning...are u sure ur only 14! ! ! ! LOL....i don't think i wrote this well at 14! SG

that is scary.. well written..