Chase Of Dreaming Comments

Hi Somahadi - This is a well strictured three verse poem with an interesting message. Scoenc and Religion (Belief) working together can enable man to make progress. For this we need to cultivate the qualities you cite in V 2 - patience - idealism - bravery - intellect and in V 3 vision and faith. JFK said 'Only a brave man will be successful' and Muhammad stated a paradox 'Work for the good of your community - as if you would live for ever - And pray for your entry to heaven as if you would die tomorrow! ! ! ! ! '. Yours in poetry - JOHN.

a nice write..inpsirational!

Do you have brilliant minding like Ibnu Sina to get your Idealism? Dreaming to get happiness in the world and also in the heaven.........., quite inspirational, beautiful write, i like it the imagery of thought,10++, thanks for sharing