Tuesday, September 30, 2008

Chase Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is it hormones pounding
In and out his dead red legs,
Or sentient terror
And a knowledge of his end?
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Kevin Eaglesfield
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Fay Slimm 09 October 2008

'Yelp-filled ears' I love this one Kev although I am still trying to guess - is it a dog on the chase - or what - your metre and rhyme is exquisite. It leaves readers like me guessing but that's the beautiful mystery of good verse. a ten to be sure from Fay.

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Original Unknown Girl 09 October 2008

Ooh gruesome and intensely dark - melikey! HG; -) xx

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