Charnel Comments

Life is constant battle berween what a man should do and what he wants to do.Inevitably we all die and can take with us only what we have learnt this lifetime And even that is blanked out when we start the next life to learn that which we need to know Your command of english is a credit to you and your vocabulary is also good But always a but You tend to come across to a native speaker of english as a little to flowery.Simple words can convey as much and sometimes more than high flown expressions. I assume you prefer honesty to false praise ivor

A battle ground becomes a graveyard! ! ! Yes! so wonderfully expressed. sathya narayana

the poem gets a robust start with a good prologue that compels to read but ends with telling something different...but ends good...good expressive writing style...10/10

i definitely gave it a ten it deserves it. it is flowing i love it

unity of mind body and soul beyond the narrow domestic walls, beautiful nerration, all the best ever.

The closing lines of this piece are filled with meaning. The reader is asked to do more than required in reading this, so there is a chance of both non communication or even mis- communicated meaning. The title is no help. For that reason I can't recommend this. However much the talent of the writer is displayed. GW62

good subject to discuss..nice descriptive write of subject...

The ill of and after effects of war are described powerfully in this poem.

Nice timely poem...on the pile of dislocted bodies....mind and heart unite more strongly to build a undestructable wall of pride, love and integration. thanks for sharing