Sunday, May 10, 2009

Charming Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Splendour beams deep in your eyes,
Thrusting my mood red to rise.
For their shine is of the sun.
I commoved, eye you as one,
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 December 2009

Poetic sojourn on eyes…nice and eyecatching…eyes are liner lead to Love... Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Vinod Kumar 15 October 2009

Lovely treat and tribute, it is divotional and pleasent shining, thanks for shanrig,10+

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so much beauty and passion are in this poem, it I could rate this poem 1 to 10 I would give it a solid 20! great job Obinna!

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Beauty Philosophy 11 September 2009

Lovely poem....real beauty lies in the eyes because they are the mirror of the soul...and those who have a beautiful soul, their beauty will remain forever whereas those whose beauty is only physical, it will wither and age through TIME..a good message to convey. Voted 10.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 01 September 2009

I love this poem how charming eyes and oh, so bright they dazzle with delight! .since it is said that the eyes are a window to the soul 'into them to look shows me love'. the words in this poem just flow from line to line...great job! A 10 for sure

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