Charlie's First Rainbow Comments

Drip........drip..........drip......... If you listen closely, you can hear my teardrops falling. You are such a great poet Stevie xx I'm sharing this one on my Facebook....YOINK!

A beautiful poem Stevie. I have helped to raise 5 kids in total, so have many similar tales I could tell, but this just tickled me pink.

A lovely poem - a delightful little story. Well written.

Gloriously Grubby...from the first line I was captivated. Simple storytelling takes a turn for the magnificient in this piece. The tone of this poem is nurturing and effortlessly entertaining, as children often are. Thanks for sharing- allowing us to share in the highs, lows, and overall beauty of an adventure at days end.

Well.I feel happy when i read this.thank for sharing a true tale, turned into a cute poem for our enjoyment.

The creative simplicity and flow are astounding.

really a cute poem...v become ready to do anything for our kids though we know it would be insensbile though