* Charleston’s Salt Flats (Couplets) .* Comments
Periwinkle dusk cradled in meringue-d moon -
Beams with tinged sun-drops each echoing its own
Crooning –love for day’s sweet end, far-flung skinny oaks
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How cleverly you've structured this one. The couplets enhance the flow of the piece and the salty tang that seems somehow to sneak between your words. Stylish, lyrical penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This is just lovely, Debora, all ' tendrilled and ribboned' like the South. Raynette
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9/3/2025 8:39:01 AM # 1.0.0
I enjoyed the melody and metaphor and especially the unorthodox style very unique, , , ,