Charity Flows Comments
I feel myself no noble
As everything comes without struggle
The empire is well built on untruthfulness
It needs no window for success
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welcome emricel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Good Duane Lynch3 minutes ago A nice message but could do with editing to make it flow better I think Good poem :) Comment +1
nice Sierra Borgman6 minutes ago Inspiring Comment +1
The rhyme scheme Wayne P5 minutes ago I liked it except for the rhyming. One stanza you were rhyming 2 and 4 line then 3 and 4 line and it got confusing. That's the only issue, if not for that you would have a solid 4 stars!
I feel myself no noble As everything comes without struggle
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catherine lajul Nice