Charity Comments

helo! ! just in time..i landed on this poem just in time...i'm trying to write a poem for my daughter, she's only a yr old.but i can't find the words. theyre all mix up in my mind.Charity did help. you're poems are so lovely, i also like the 'am i supposed to help and the thankless job. it's obvious, you're inspired by poeple around you.

Wow. I really love the flow of this poem. it is very good. Wish I could write quality stuff like that. All the best Love Becky

This is one very fortunate girl who glides across your heart with the ease and beauty of a swan. Lovley writing.Love Duncan

NICE POEM, I NEED TO WRITE MORE POEMS LLIKE THIS, .....................

Is Charity the reader, a person or the act of benovelence! whichever, the poem touches.

This sounds like Christmas Card Doggerel until you dig a bit deeper and find - forgive the pun - the mother lode. Well done! I'll get through all your poetry eventually -I know it will be a joyful travail. Tony

Very sweet and from the heart. Your daughter's a lucky girl!

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Brings back a few good memories, kids all grown now, no grandkids in sight. Very nice poem. H

This is such a sweet poem. I have two daughters and could totally relate. They do change your world. Mine our now both officially teenagers...AHH! How did that happen....Beauitful stuff that shows your heart.

Mother love can not be replaced....who than our mother can love us more...Great poem...I was touched...

Mother love can not be replaced....who than our mother can loves more...Great poem...I was touched...