Wednesday, July 9, 2014

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A beautiful mongoose, half its body in golden color
Went to the palace of 'Udhishtira' the emperor
Man of wisdom, justice, and perfect knowledge
Even to know the pleadings of animals it is said,
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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The honor of humility is here eloquently expressed my friend!

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 July 2014

A very well written story poem. Enjoyed.

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 July 2014

Well written story poem. Enjoyed.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 July 2014

Beautiful poem. Moral of the story is very beautiful. Most of all the way you presented the story into a poem is really wonderful. I loved reading each lines.....

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John Tiong Chunghoo 09 July 2014

great poetry my friend. you are skilful.

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* Sunprincess * 09 July 2014

........a very intelligent mongoose in this write.....truly a beautiful story sir, I enjoyed...

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