Friday, October 16, 2015

Charities. Comments

Rating: 5.0

If your bike tyre got punctured,
Never be in dissappointment.
But thank God for making a means,
A portion in a livelihood,
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
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This poem teaches about wastage of food and financial management. Well expressed, thanks for sharing.full vote

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2016

It is better we help the poor when we have the means. Thanks ofr sharing.

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Liza Sudina 05 November 2015

Always thank God for everything! without asking why. How right and wonderful!

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2015

Simple yet mind blowing poem, I liked it, One should always think positively in all situation, we know not and Almighty is all aware about our intentions, our deeds and our life path...Thanks for sharing such a nice poem...10++

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T Rajan Evol 28 October 2015

In all ways and in all circumstances one should thank Almighty..Nice poem,

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Indira Renganathan 27 October 2015

Your words preach highly the best moral method of living a life.I'm pleased to read this poem repeatedly.High ideal in simple words...great theme Abdul

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Kewayne Wadley 25 October 2015

A great poem that speaks volumes! +10. The like button cannot justify how great This is

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Saheb Mohapatra 24 October 2015

very matured thoughts..........you have presented your thoughts in a very simple way but it conveys a very ethical and important message............great poem

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Pranab K Chakraborty 23 October 2015

The poem is strictly for a certain class of people who has their extra coin to share. It's not any writing which conceives an universal message for all the people. Because who only can arrange a little food after a long and hard labour, they can't think to throw their rotten foods for the dogs to share. Very complicated the equation and the major portion of human members on this surface today are ready to share only their heart apart from any other material objects essential to exist. Any way, the writing for the people belongs to solvent class is unique.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 October 2015

Charity is one of the best ways to show love for God. You are indeed blessed! Beautiful thoughts in a beautiful poem!

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Paul Sebastian 17 October 2015

Great message on counting the blessings in the midst of adversities. We must see that in every circumstance there is an equivalent benefit. Thank you.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2015

always thank an almighty for making you happy atleast you are placed in happy zone don't forget about your days that have gone Keep some fund aside and divide for charity with always thanks giving to an almighty

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 16 October 2015

This nice poem gave me a fresh and wider outlook! Actually nothing in the world is wasted, like energy that just transforms! Thank you!

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Akhtar Jawad 16 October 2015

a poem with a nice moral........................10

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Anita Sharma 16 October 2015

If your hand gave a coin extra, Don't be in dissappointment. But thank God for making a means, A portion in a livelihood, For a poor and hardworking man.ooh lovely words very heartfelt.loved it much

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Kelly Kurt 16 October 2015

A very inspirational poem, Abdulrazak. I try to look for the positive in everything. It only takes a moment to find a silver lining and it dissipates the feelings of frustration. Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 16 October 2015

If we learn to look at everything that happen in our lives, life will definitely be much happier! In fact this is the right perspective! But how many of us can think like this! Some how all of us can develop a soft corner for the less fortunate and share with them something from our bounty! Very lofty thoughts!

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 16 October 2015

Self sacrificing and very honorable thoughts. I liked the moral behind every stanza

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Sanjukta Nag 16 October 2015

Things happen for a reason - and you presented this concept very craftily. Great write!

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Rajnish Manga 16 October 2015

Let us be kind and noble to those who are less fortunate than us. Amazing contemplation transformed into a lovely poem. Thanks.

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