Monday, August 24, 2009

.....Chariots Of Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

The small dung beetles lot is a chariot of fire
For some it is a life of a slinking liar,
To get a wife he has to be tall
Fact is some are dam too small.
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Ken e Hall
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To get a wife he has to be tall Fact is some are dam too small..... whole life will be on fire if it is mismatched.. you have good way of putting life to gether. nice way and good presentation....10

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So interesting! Creative in imagery. Loved the testes part~; D

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Kesav Easwaran 14 May 2010

poetic test on testes truth...interesting read...10

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Ben Gieske 18 October 2009

I see you are basing this on scientific fact. Some say that poetry is all about the truth. You must share that view. What better way to teach science!

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 August 2009

woww.. beetle chick, Is she hot! ! ! ken? ? ? ? ? this is again is very fun to read! ! good.. cheers shan

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Colin J... 26 August 2009

Good one Ken, made me smile... Just goes to show you can't beat 'bigger testes.' Colin J...

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