Thursday, October 30, 2008

Charioteer Has Gone To Sleep Comments

Rating: 3.4

The charioteer has gone to sleep
Ovecome by fatigue of wearisome ways
Unaware of where he is
All that's evident
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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Tsira Goge 21 December 2009

He has lost himself in strange worlds ............................................... Naseer, Remarkable poem... Also your skill rather to words..10... Thank you... Best wishes, Tsira

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 May 2009

'He has lost himself in strange worlds Comfortable climes Riding a golden chariot And holding the princess's hand The charioteer has gone to sleep' nice one indeed...your poems are concise, but they speaks a lot.. regards shashendra 10+++

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ata khan 23 February 2009

what a way to tell a tale, thanks for such a lovely ride 10+

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Sandra Fowler 04 December 2008

Superb metaphorical write. Strength for the journey, my friend. Kind regards, Sandra

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Roshini Samuel 06 November 2008

lovely verses! ! grt Rdgs R

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