Charged Twice.... [ Funeral With A Twist; Death Expenses; My Response To Tom Allport's Comment On My ' Fun-Eral' Poem; Very Short] Comments

Love how you are always sharing laughter. Thank You Bri

I had to laugh at that last line. Very funny. Thanks for making my day.

Bri can extract the juice of fun from the hardest fruits.

Afraid I cannot agree with Valsa, I firmly believed that the procession passed a sweet young thing and her perfume was the cause of your rising.

Now I read both the poems once more and read your reply to my comment on Fun Eral...! Had a hearty laugh! I don't think it was a miracle as the raising of Lazarus by Christ...! In all probability as the funeral procession was passing to the cremation house, you must have 'smelt' an ice cream vendor. (With the lid of the coffin shut, you might not have seen him.) ....! Now I regret the tears shed in vain....! You deserve to be charged twice!

Very interesting but unless one would not know the context of this poem would be fail to swing with its humour..... Thanks.... S. Nurul.

a very very funny write and like the following saying's go you can't keep a good man down? (so true?) or a good deed done is better than non? ................wonderfullywellwrittenSirBri?