Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Charade Comments

Rating: 3.0

don't wake me up
when you leave
it won't matter now
i have cried all my tears
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Eloida Capuno
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Danny Draper 15 March 2012

Emotional, tragic and very romantic, compact and powerful in balance and structure. Love and pain the obverse sides of a coin we seldem wish to toss. Good piece.

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