Character Versus Pretence Comments

favorite line so far (for its meaning & cleverness, not its structure) : " Success and progress inhabit a loo or an igloo." i've never been in an igloo, ....but....i've eaten an Eskimo Pie! ** ** " Eskimo Pie is a brand name for a chocolate-covered vanilla ice cream bar" Hey, i had NOT even gotten to YOUR POEM'S " pies" ! ! ! Honest; i DO have character. :) stanza 2: i'd use " yields" bri ;)