Sunday, May 18, 2008

Character Suicide Comments

Rating: 4.5

this mask
i put on
for you
and
...
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Floyd Crenshaw
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R H 21 May 2008

A bittersweet penning with a kick in the final line - we can paint on that smile, pretend everything is alright but when the mask comes off and true feelings are revealed the emotional undressing can reveals quite a different side. Great title here too Floyd. (I penned something along the lines of this mask theme in a poem called Automaton) . j

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Ian X 18 May 2008

I like the honesty, and the finish.

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