Monday, July 30, 2012

Chapters In Bodies Comments

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we write chapters in bodies
wrapped around shared thought...
constantly dying, constantly being born.
sweat, semen, urine, and breast milk,
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Captain Cur 30 July 2012

of course I like line six the best. This is a marvelous poem, with many facets, some of them so obvious we completely miss them.

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