Chapter One- The Key In The Darkness Comments
'youll be fine! ', said my mom in a calm tone of voice.
I was sitting in my mom warm car, look out at the passanger seat window.Out that window was my new school. The school Id been waiting all summer to go to. My older school was a very small, private school. Im mean this school was extreemly small, to the point that the average people in each class was about 15 students. My old school was also very strict, catholic school.To also a point were we went to chapel every sunday and even had religious class everyday.
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K...this poem was written with feelings, but i do not come across anything except ur mere feelings... Ur poetry is just expressing an incident but without any poetic sense. These kinda poems are better to be kept in personal diaries. Also there was a mistake... 'Good bye' we use this phrase when we r goin very far and not sure that we will meet again in our life to the concerned person... So using of this phrase is incorrect here. Overall the poem was good. :)
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7/23/2025 2:07:16 PM # 1.0.0
sorry.... i put this up here due to a book i was going to start. this was the first chapter, i know kinda bad and lame. so thats why u proably didnt like it! ! ! soryy! ! !