Spinning eyes, pretty lips,
Golden strip
Presence sign of purity,
In the Closest of divinity,
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I wish to teach this poem to my M.A students for their Practical criticism question where they are supposed to do the EXPLICATION DE TEXTE as Geoffrey Leech suggested...as this will give me an opportunity to read and re-read this poem so beautifully composed...images, sounds, rhymes, stanza forms... and the expression with the word-play...thank you for sharing it with me.
Strong heart in writing you have and a beautiful mix and rhyme with your words seems to all come together and form a story Outstanding!
A delight to read...clearly a very passionate verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
your writing is good keep it up. This poem shows how much you will respect your tradition. And also your love
Interesting one 😊