Monday, February 7, 2011

Chapter 21: An Aftermath Comments

Rating: 4.8

Spinning eyes, pretty lips,
Golden strip
Presence sign of purity,
In the Closest of divinity,
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Sase Vardhni 25 March 2017

Interesting one 😊

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Shahzia Batool 15 October 2012

I wish to teach this poem to my M.A students for their Practical criticism question where they are supposed to do the EXPLICATION DE TEXTE as Geoffrey Leech suggested...as this will give me an opportunity to read and re-read this poem so beautifully composed...images, sounds, rhymes, stanza forms... and the expression with the word-play...thank you for sharing it with me.

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Connor Whyte 10 July 2012

Strong heart in writing you have and a beautiful mix and rhyme with your words seems to all come together and form a story Outstanding!

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lover of poetry sweet 09 September 2011

heart felt poem and very impressive

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 15 July 2011

A delight to read...clearly a very passionate verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Divya Divya B 28 February 2011

your writing is good keep it up. This poem shows how much you will respect your tradition. And also your love

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