Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Chapped Lips Comments

Rating: 4.4

I taste you still
on my lips
chapped from
your sudden
...
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Chris G. Vaillancourt
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 October 2009

Psychic after-taste of lip bite! ‘pain is better to keep then is the reality of holding you…’ You’re carrying love luggage wow! Enjoyed. Ten Ms Nivedita New post: Lie Sly or other poems if you kindly read and comment. niv

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Ruth Walters 15 October 2009

and why is he left with this memory, what has he done....where is the biting creature that he once held, has he misused her? So many questions left unanwered in this poem.... Ruthie

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