Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Chaperon Of My Lost Rhymes! Comments

Rating: 5.0

O! Muse! which one of you
Should I invoke as my aid?
In which land, to what place
Should I go in search of inspiration?
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Savita Tyagi
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Daniel Brick 10 March 2016

WOW! From now on the Muse of immemorial memory has an additional name: Chaperon of My Lost Rhymes. You portray her fickle behavior, her playfulness when you want to get down to business. But you still acknowledge she is ever the guardian of your creativity, even if she does not inspire something new. There is an irreducible mystery in the source and timing of our creative moments. Your poem acknowledges that too. This is a fine MUSE poem, and a perceptive take on poetic creativity.

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Savita Tyagi 11 March 2016

Thank you so much Daniel. Yes the hide and seek play of our creative muse is some thing we just have to accept and play along. It's mysterious ways are certainly fascinating.

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Mark Heathcote 17 February 2016

Beautifully penned nice share enjoyed.

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Savita Tyagi 11 March 2016

Thank you so much Mark.

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Mithilesh Yadav 17 February 2016

grrt penned mam ji........ hope you understand hindi.... mere hansi khushi mein tu sath tha mere, kai anjaan rashton mein tu sath tha mere..... aab jo gum hai to tu nhi sath mere, samjh nhi pata kaisey hai halat mere..... gum hai to tu nhi hai ya tu nahi hai to gum hai.......? ? ? ? ?

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Savita Tyagi 17 February 2016

Thank you Mithlesh for your lovely comment. Yes I understand Hindi very well. It is my mother tongue. Your words fit very well with my poem in a very poetic way. I will look up for your full poem at your page. I you could send me the name it sure will help.

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